Sentence variety

Make your texts more interesting to read by varying the sentences you write. If sentences are constantly of the same type and length, and with the same openers, the text will be monotonous and either too simplistic or too complex, so aim to write different types of sentences that are of different lengths and have different openers.

  • Sentence types

    There are four types of sentences in English: simple, compound, complex and compound-complex.

    • Simple sentences consist of one independent clause (that is to say, at least a subject and a verb and, perhaps, an object, complement or adverbial).

      Exemple adequatSlavery was officially abolished in the United States in 1863.


    • Compound sentences consist of two independent clauses joined by a conjunction (and, or, so, but, etc.).

      Exemple adequatSlavery was officially abolished in the United States in 1863 but was still widely practised until the end of 1865.


    • Complex sentences consist of one independent clause and one dependent clause linked by a subordinating conjunction (when, if, because, since, before, although, etc.).

      Exemple adequatAlthough slavery was officially abolished in the United States in 1863, it was still widely practised until the end of 1865.


    • Compound-complex sentences contain more than one independent clause and at least one dependent clause.

      Exemple adequatAlthough slavery was officially abolished in the United States in 1863, it was still widely practised until the end of 1865 and racial bias still pervades American society today.


  • Sentence length

    Well-written texts are made up of sentences of different lengths: short, medium and long. If you write too many long sentences, readers may feel overwhelmed by the excess detail and be unable to identify the important points. If you write too many short sentences, readers again may be unable to identify the important points and your text will sound childish.

  • Sentence openers

    Sentence openers are any structures in the initial position of a sentence. They can give writing greater sophistication and help maintain readers’ interest. In his book The Craft of Scientific Writing, Michael Alley defined seven different types (Alley, 1996).
     
    • Subject-verb

      Exemple adequatSlavery was abolished in 1863.


    • Prepositional phrases

      Exemple adequatIn the Deep South, the Ku Klux Klan was set up as a vigilante justice system in 1865.


    • Transitional words

      Exemple adequatHowever, the organization was suppressed in 1872.


    • Introductory subordinate clauses

      Exemple adequatAlthough the Civil War led to the abolition of slavery, it did not change the basic power relations between African Americans and whites.


    • Infinitive phrases

      Exemple adequatTo fully understand the influence of racial bias on the 2016 election, we measured anti-immigrant sentiment and racial resentment separately.


    • Participle phrases

      Exemple adequatSummarizing the work of numerous political scientists, the author claims that the decisive factor in the electoral victory was racial resentment.


    • Verb

      Exemple adequatNote that the victorious candidate never distanced himself from the opinions of white supremacist leaders.

      To see the importance of sentence type, sentence length and sentence openers, take a look at the following text (from Alley, 1996), in which there is very little variety.

      Exemple inadequatMount St. Helens erupted on May 18, 1980. A cloud of hot rock and gas surged northward from its collapsing slope. The cloud devastated more than 500 square kilometers of forests and lakes. The effects of Mount St. Helens were well documented with geophysical instruments. The origin of the eruption is not well understood. Volcanic explosions are driven by a rapid expansion of steam. Some scientists believe that the steam comes from groundwater heated by magma. Other scientists believe the steam comes from water originally dissolved in the magma. We have to understand the source of steam in volcanic eruptions. We have to determine how much water the magma contains.


      All the sentences are of the same type (simple), all are of approximately the same length (short/medium) and all open in the same way (subject-verb). This means that readers pause at very regular intervals and the greater stress that is naturally given to the subject falls in exactly the same place, thus creating an extremely monotonous rhythm. Now compare it to the following revised version.

      Exemple adequatMount St. Helens erupted on May 18, 1980. Its slope collapsing, the mountain emitted a cloud of hot rock and gas and, within minutes, the cloud had devastated more than 500 square kilometers of forests and lakes. Although the effects of the eruption were well documented, the origin is not well understood. Volcanic explosions are driven by a rapid expansion of steam and, recently, there has been considerable debate over the source of this steam. Is it groundwater heated by the magma or water originally dissolved in the magma itself? To understand the source of steam in volcanic explosions, we have to determine how much water the magma contains.


      The revised text above has a much more varied rhythm because it exploits the variables of sentence type, length and opener. The first sentence is simple, short and has a subject-verb opener. The second sentence is compound, long and opens with a participle phrase. The third sentence is complex, medium length and opens with a subordinate conjunction. And so on.
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Recommended citation:
«Sentence variety» [en línia]. A: Llibre d’estil de la Universitat de Barcelona. Barcelona: Universitat de Barcelona. Serveis Lingüístics. <https://www.ub.edu/llibre-estil/criteri.php?id=3280> [consulta: 21 novembre 2024].
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