Parallelism

Parallelism refers to giving each element in a list the same grammatical category (noun phrases, verb clauses, infinitives, etc.). The similarity of the grammatical form makes it easier for readers to perceive a similarity in content and function. The sentence below is not parallel.

Exemple no admissibleThe students’ objections were the injustice of the measures and that they were unconstitutional.


The first element of the list (the injustice of the measures) is a noun phrase while the second (they were unconstitutional) is a verb clause. The sentence would be clearer if it were rewritten. The sentence below contains a verb instead of the nominalization objections and then has a verb clause that contains a list of two elements, both of which are adjectives.

Exemple adequatThe students objected that the measures were unjust and unconstitutional.


In any series of items, then, make sure that each element of the series is in exactly the same form as all of the others. In other words, don't follow the example below, where the writer tries to combine two noun phrases (the personality and the contacts) with a verb clause (have the knowledge).

Exemple no admissibleThe students taking this master’s degree will acquire the personality, the contacts and have the knowledge to succeed in almost any business venture.


Instead, rephrase the sentence like this:

Exemple adequatThe students taking this master’s degree will acquire the personality, the contacts and the knowledge to succeed in almost any business venture.


This general guideline can affect even the smallest, and seemingly trivial, of words. Therefore, not

Exemple no admissibleThe Erasmus students will talk of their experiences in Paris, in Athens and Moscow.


but

Exemple adequatThe Erasmus students will talk of their experiences in Paris, Athens and Moscow.


The principle of parallelism should also be respected in vertical lists. Therefore, not

Exemple no admissibleStudents must
a) present the official application form,
b) their personal academic certificate, and
c) proof of payment.


but

Exemple adequatStudents must present
a) the official application form,
b) their personal academic certificate, and
c) proof of payment.


Take particular care when you use such structures as not only ... but also. Therefore, not

Exemple no admissibleMaster’s degrees not only prepare professionals but also researchers.


but

Exemple adequatMaster’s degrees prepare not only professionals but also researchers.

Universitat de Barcelona. Serveis Lingüístics
Darrera actualització: 30-5-2024
Recommended citation:
«Parallelism» [en línia]. A: Llibre d’estil de la Universitat de Barcelona. Barcelona: Universitat de Barcelona. Serveis Lingüístics. <https://www.ub.edu/llibre-estil/criteri.php?id=2467> [consulta: 27 novembre 2024].