Cohesion and coherence

Cohesion and coherence are similar concepts but not the same. Cohesion refers to the micro-level of the text, the logical connections between words and sentences that give a sense of flow. Coherence refers to the macro-level of the text, the sense that the paragraph or block clearly communicates an idea to the reader. You can use several techniques to ensure that your paragraphs are cohesive and coherent.
  • Exploit repetition

    One way to make text cohesive is to repeat words, to repeat ideas using different words (synonyms) or to refer back to previous ideas using pronouns or shell nouns (see example text below). Repetition, particularly of characters in subject position, and constant reference back to previous information gives text a sense of unity and focus.

  • Use transitions

    Transitions are words and phrases that signal relationships between ideas. They can be used to good effect at the beginning of sentences to make text flow but, be careful, they cannot replace good organization. One of the dangers of transitions is to use too many of them.  

    Addition
    Cause/effect
    Sequence
    Also
    Because
    First/In the first place
    Again
    Since
    Second/In the second place
    Then
    Thus
    Third
    In addition
    As a result
    Next
    Moreover
    Therefore
    Finally


    Contrast
    Example
    Summary
    In contrast
    For example
    To conclude
    However
    For instance
    To sum up
    Although
    By way of example
    In conclusion
    Despite
    In this case
    In brief
    On the other hand
    Namely
    In the final analysis


  • Move from old information to new

    Text is more readily understood if writers begin their sentences with old or familiar information and then go on to add something new or unfamiliar. The old/familiar information comes from two sources: (a) the sentences readers have just read, and (b) readers’ knowledge of the subject. This principle goes hand in hand with the principles of characters as subjects and end focus. As soon as writers have stated their main characters (normally towards the beginning of the text), readers will accept them as familiar information, so when characters are regularly placed at the beginning of sentences, the information naturally flows from old to new.
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Recommended citation:
«Cohesion and coherence» [en línia]. A: Llibre d’estil de la Universitat de Barcelona. Barcelona: Universitat de Barcelona. Serveis Lingüístics. <https://www.ub.edu/llibre-estil/criteri.php?id=3303> [consulta: 23 novembre 2024].
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